Our first walk, I remember,
By the beach shore,
On an afternoon so fine,
Cocooned by the smell of warm saline...
Waves hit softly, breeze murmured,
The sea weeds danced to a song of love,
Lost in thoughts, solving our lives crosswords,
Totally oblivious of a sunny journey together.
Not a word we spoke,
Not a touch we felt,
Serenity engulfed both,
Making the moment just perfect...
I wish for us to be one...
During autumn, spring, winter or sun,
Writing our own story amidst storms or mist,
Dear, together lets make fresh footprints !
Psst psst... I am sorry.. I had promised to do this posting on Friday but err.. I was digging deep into my inbox for this image (sent by Ram.. blush blush.. almost a year and a half back!) that I had so preciously saved and couldn't find it and when I got it (of course Ram had to send it to me!! sigh!), I remembered I had left behind this poem at office (tishk! a knock on my head!)!! So here it is... Better late than never! God bless...
11 Snowflakes:
the poem is as sweet as you and as sweet as Rama and as sweet as your love and as sweet as chocolates... lovely lovely...keep them coming!
Thanks Viji! :D
Awesome,Nami!The poem is as beautiful as your pair is.And oh, boy! this is romance at its best :)
Geee... I am glad you liked it coz you said you dont easily comment on poems! Thank you Kooran!!
great start ...lovely work chechi...ram, you lucky dog...but seriously both of you are quite the pair...wills ciggie style
lovely!!! :)
@Manoj: Thank you MD.. and yeah! Dont call Ram a dog!! Dishum :P
Actually... The picture exactly depicts our first walk on the beach... even before we became the best of friends!
@Priya: Thank you pal...
Awwww!
Lovely poem Naa!
The second stanza was superb!
Keep them coming! :D :D
@Aa daaa- Thanks baby!! Mwah!! :*
sweet one Nami!
Thanks a lot Devka!! Take care akka! :*
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